...This Way Comes

...This Way Comes

By crowen | The Story of Rob Johns | 8 Dec 2024


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Userwrite dark delta blues lyrics about a young man beginning to experience the early stages of a demonic possession. Things like only hearing whip-poor-wills on his left. Beginning to hear voices on the wind. Seeing shadows moving in shadows. a veil of darkness beginning to envelope him.    

ChatGPT said:

GPT  

🎵 Song Name: "Shadows Crawlin’ In"
🎵 Genre: Delta Blues
🎵 Tone: Ominous and chilling
🎵 Instrument Selection: Slide guitar, low rumbling drums, ghostly harmonica
🎵 Metric Density of Vocals: Verses: 8–10 syllables per measure, Chorus: 6–8 syllables per measure

Let’s take a dark walk down a haunted dirt road where a young man’s soul starts to slip away:


Verse 1

I hear whip-poor-wills just off to my side,
Left ear whispers, where the shadows hide.
The wind starts hummin’ in a voice I don’t know,
Low and mournful, like a death-row moan.

Chorus

Shadows crawlin’ in, takin’ hold of me,
A veil of black where my eyes should see.
A whisperin’ wind, a call to sin,
I feel the darkness crawlin’ in.

Verse 2

The moon won’t rise, and the stars all fade,
The air grows heavy in the devil’s shade.
I see shadows movin’ where shadows stay still,
They twist and they curl, bendin’ to their will.

Chorus

Shadows crawlin’ in, takin’ hold of me,
A veil of black where my eyes should see.
A whisperin’ wind, a call to sin,
I feel the darkness crawlin’ in.

Bridge

My own voice calls from the blackest tree,
Sayin’, "Boy, you’re mine, there’s no breakin’ free."
I try to run, but the ground won’t let go,
My feet sink deep where no roots should grow.

Verse 3

The night wraps tight like a shroud on my skin,
The cold hand of hell creeps under my grin.
The whip-poor-will cries, but only for me,
A cursed tune for the damned to see.

Outro

I hear the voices, they’re callin’ my name,
The darkness laughs, and I feel the flame.
So if you feel the shadows start pullin’ you in,
Pray hard, boy, before it begins.


Did this eerie story hit the right notes? Let me know if we should dig deeper or add some bone-chilling music to bring it to life! 🎶🔥

   

You said:

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ChatGPT said:

GPT  

Thank you! I'm thrilled it captured the creeping dread you were after. If you ever want to craft this into a full blues epic—complete with ominous slide guitar and ghostly harmonica wails—just let me know. Stay haunting, my friend! 🎸👹

 

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The Story of Rob Johns
The Story of Rob Johns

This is a project that came out of thought in the May of 2024. I asked Suno AI to write me a Delta Blues song about the occult. I was thinking about Robert Johnson and what it might be like if he were able to write music with todays instruments and recording equipment. I came back to the idea after some updates on Suno AI in November of 2024. I began to interact with ChatGPT 4 and then pipe the lyrics through Suno based on it's musical suggestions where I could. Decided to document the process.

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