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TopContent: I don't see what can be criticized here.
I think how I would remove these birches ... Most likely, I would not press the trigger.
Or was waiting for volumetric lighting.
The idea is good and the birches are interesting.
It is a fact. But there is no volume.
Perhaps I would take a picture of them at night. Putting 4 led panels. Perhaps with cold filters for backgrounds and with warm ones for birches. And I made a little smoke on the backgrounds on the back.
But this is not about this work.
In the current conditions as an author and just with a phone in hand, I could not have done anything better.

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