Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions
Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

A dark, fantastical tale that is intended to unfold a paragraph, or thereabouts, at a time.


Fragment 68

5 Apr 2021 1 minute read 3 comments Jay Lonnquist

Pyna bends and sniffs like a hunting-beast at the tenderly-painted receptacles, balanced reverently.  She is careful not to touch the immaculate shrine-plate, though her finger drifts towards the creamy contents of the curving bowl.  There to hang fo...

Fragment 67

3 Apr 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

The pair move out of the constrictive alley. Two shades drifting from the well guarded square abutting the Inn that are then fast swallowed by the tangle of masonry and meander.  The air here tastes of perpetual petrichor. Where the cool fog from the...

Fragment 66

31 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Umin clears the board, leaving a clatter of soiled plates. He then bathes. The warm, lemon-sweet water blackening in the basin as he assiduously scrapes days of chalky filth from his skin.  Moving on to rifle through a pungent red cedar wardrobe. Eme...

Fragment 65

28 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Umin returns his attention to the task of filling his belly, as she settles the tub at the foot of his bed with a crisp, fleeting cacophony.  “Such a feast.” He murmurs between mouthfuls of honeyed bread crust and fruity fungus.  Though no gourmand b...

Fragment 64

25 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

The room is still and cool.  Downy linens having slipped from bare and wiry limbs. His eyes wandering and still sleepy, light upon a shallow bowl bedside, piled high with minikin blood-hued oranges, bright like candle-shine against a heap of the scal...

Fragment 63

24 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Umin has little recollection of their return journey. The arduousness of his travails at last overcrowing, he remembers being suddenly embraced by slim and supple limbs with the inevitable strength of marble. Then being charily borne aloft, like a wi...

Fragment 62

22 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

The feculent ragman flinches, as though its name were an uttered curse or admonition. Umin moves gingerly closer, his boots soiled and squelching above the unspeakably succulent softness beneath his feet. In the near muck lies a plate of partially-co...

Fragment 61

19 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Here the stink is sour and mycelial, a fungal ferment of rotten metalcraft and creamy dripstone. Umin recoils, recalling his not altogether distant captivity in a similar, if dustier oubliette. There is but the faintest light in this ghastly place. ...

Fragment 60

17 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

For my eye, no need, still. Light for you though love. It is darker, deeper here than the Middle-below above.   From a concealing pocket, somewhere under-gown she pulls something frost-blue and opaque, passing its waxiness to Umin.  The stone-thing i...

Fragment 59

16 Mar 2021 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Sepet, with lips pursed, slips like a rusty-hued wraith back into the curtain folds. In a veritable blink, returning with the iron-dry click of numerous weighty keys carried on a ponderous ring.  Jewel box diminutive, to granary-key hand-span, a lock...