Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions
Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

A dark, fantastical tale that is intended to unfold a paragraph, or thereabouts, at a time.


Fragment 109

29 Jun 2025 4 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.02

Pyna blinked abruptly, and birdlike, startled.  As with a shout, Umin tore himself away from her touch.  Her cracked-glass gaze, wide and ablaze. Oh… That was Unforeseen. Umin rolled away.  Retching sourly into the stark, obsidian-dark sand-piles. “H...

Fragment 108

10 Jun 2025 5 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.01

“The First Weavers were… Innocent…” “They sang for simple things.  When men and women first bent towards the sky. Standing! Like wheat stalks! No longer snuffling for worms, downcast and beastly in carriage.” “This was, an aeon ere the First Foundati...

Fragment 107

17 May 2025 2 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.01

Umin found himself suspended.  Pendant and bodiless, somewhere Between. Then rushing through pale, rarefied cloudscapes. The brumous descent soon unfolded above a sprawling map, far below. No, it was a city. The Great City… The imperishable bastion o...

Fragment 106

10 May 2025 2 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.01

Pyna had allowed Umin another bell of dreamless sleep. Following which they began a trek along the nameless, onyx-obsidian strand.  The Great Lower Sea, a torpid black tongue, perennially licking the lifeless shore upon their right hand. Pyna appeare...

Fragment 105

4 May 2025 4 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.01

He awoke convulsively, with the cresting roar of reverberating surf filling his ears. The weight of the Great Lower Sea’s torpid, black waters crushing his breast from within.  Umin rolled over once again, and vomited a sickly, ropy stream of coal-da...

Fragment 104

30 Apr 2025 3 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.03

Umin struck the soupy surf feet first, and was swiftly swallowed up. Imbibed by the Great Lower Sea’s torpid, black salinity. He was able to draw a single, sufficient breath before plunging through its thickly striated darkness.  The sea’s bituminous...

Fragment 103

22 Apr 2025 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.02

Pyna twisted and kicked. Tore and pulled. As the tenebrous mass of clotted, lurid obscenities bore her deeper into the lightless reaches of the Great Lower Sea’s gloomy, and brinish womb. Her wheaty locks blooming beneath the murky waters, like that...

Fragment 74 - Interlude

17 Apr 2025 2 minute read 1 comment Jay Lonnquist $0.03

Elsewhere and otherwhiles… In the Above, Autumn makes forth.  The goddess An’ii of the Sere Leaf strides again across verdant wolds, wringing the sap from Summer’s failing heart. The disciple, her patron now lost to the abundant and faceless throngs...

Fragment 102

14 Apr 2025 6 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.03

Elsewhere and otherwhiles… Pyna followed Umin’s disconcerted gaze to a space above the brewing, molten fire-mounts and their restless, sulphurous smokes.  There, billowing against the Great Lower Sea’s false horizon, loomed the booming apparition of...

Fragment 101

1 Mar 2025 11 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist $0.01

It was well, four bells before dawn. Pyna had descended from the Spire of Clioh, without further impediment or entanglement. Now shrouded in voluminous garments of concealing coal-dark, an inky wimple binding her wheaty mane, and a veil masking all,...