Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions
Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

A dark, fantastical tale that is intended to unfold a paragraph, or thereabouts, at a time.


Fragment 25

27 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

With a final hasty mouthful Umin abandons, with a quirk of reluctance, the bowl and skitters after the heedlessly receding crimson cloth and girl-shape.  “Then I’ve found the Shore..."  The thought was softly breathless. A lingering apprehension, as...

Fragment 24

24 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

I will take you to the Marquis Meshmin. This forces Umin to pause and swallow thickly. Fear and now something else bending his thoughts. "Meshmin, who keeps in the…" The Barrows. Hard by the Gate of Candles… It smiles with a spider’s silkiness. Sup s...

Fragment 23

19 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Umin watches wordlessly, as the remains of rabbits fall wetly to the stones. It isn’t long before the meat stops dropping and the creature returns to its previous posture, offering the bowl to Umin as though he were a shying mutt. Not far from the tr...

Fragment 22

17 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Terror strangles any further speech, as the creature pauses with uncanny stillness in mid-motion like some manner of alien supplicant with an outstretched brim-full begging-bowl. Oh... My love is a leaf-eater. With a tiny wry tugging at the corners o...

Fragment 21

15 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Eat. Sweet. Lest you grow reedy. Umin, his breath locked frightfully away in his breast, licks tight lips and against all grasping hunger and screaming instinct of self preservation gives a little head shake and a struggling whisper. "Can’t. Took the...

Fragment 20

10 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Cupping the bowl as though it were a frangible, precious thing in a pair of diminutive, death-pale hands.  It peers unblinking up at the taller Umin, by a head’s height, aspect an unreadable mask. Only for the briefest of moments as the bow of its li...

Fragment 19

9 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Into a shallow hands-breadth bowl, it ladles a stew, still bubbling thickly.  The sensual stink of boiled meat and savoury herbs tickles the aching animal hunger long restive in Umin’s belly.   Without a stray sound, the waifish apparition sets the l...

Fragment 18

7 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Porridge love... Pheasant stew. Or was it rabbit now? Oh yes, rabbit. Do you know?  How far and where.  I had to walk  To find a hare…   Umin is unable to suppress the shivering that locks his jaw and hardens his limbs.

Fragment 17

5 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

It stood there, before a broad, brassy kettle. Perched as before on naked tiptoe, it peers into the wide, toothless jaws of the squat toad-like vessel. Which murmurs thickly with the low, booming voice of roiling oil, or some similarly viscous concoc...

Fragment 16

2 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Leaving Umin unable to sift sound from thought. Not knowing whether the voice had entered his ear or found shape in the spaces behind his eyes. Umin shook his woolly head to clear out the lingering rattle in his brain-box, before gingerly padding for...