Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions
Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

Storytelling, in Paragraph Proportions

A dark, fantastical tale that is intended to unfold a paragraph, or thereabouts, at a time.


Fragment 18

7 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Porridge love... Pheasant stew. Or was it rabbit now? Oh yes, rabbit. Do you know?  How far and where.  I had to walk  To find a hare…   Umin is unable to suppress the shivering that locks his jaw and hardens his limbs.

Fragment 17

5 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

It stood there, before a broad, brassy kettle. Perched as before on naked tiptoe, it peers into the wide, toothless jaws of the squat toad-like vessel. Which murmurs thickly with the low, booming voice of roiling oil, or some similarly viscous concoc...

Fragment 16

2 Nov 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Leaving Umin unable to sift sound from thought. Not knowing whether the voice had entered his ear or found shape in the spaces behind his eyes. Umin shook his woolly head to clear out the lingering rattle in his brain-box, before gingerly padding for...

Fragment 15

31 Oct 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

The expanse above an inky unknowable depth, the way forward narrow.  Umin spreads his arms wide and warily. Soon finding the rough-smooth, like glass resolved once and hardened again, walls with the flats of his open palms, elbows slightly bent. Pace...

Fragment 14

29 Oct 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Umin glumly and suspiciously peers out into down-thick darkness, but for a distant pin-prick of soft-seeming fire that sets the vaulty black above to looming all the more profoundly, maliciously. His motion towards the distant, gleaming signpost is p...

Fragment 13

28 Oct 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

I want him Father. Let me… The half-spaces between waking and drifting where things sonorous and frightful came to murmur.  Hours compressed. Umin slept. Oh, the chime is ringling. Oh... Awakening.  To find the low, knotty-iron doorway wide and unhin...

Fragment 12

28 Oct 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Oh, sweet.  A little scantle of rough meat. Oh, wrapped in a rat-skin for you, sweet...   Sing-song mockery. Close now, little fingers like gleaming bloodless alabaster curled through the sandy-russet chain-links of his prison.  Chin perched playfull...

Fragment 11

14 Oct 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

His name is Umin and he is simply a thief. A simple thief. A bleeder of purses and accounts. His fortunes a little less than likeable of late.   Something small and shapeless twists out of the dark, falling near to hand with a sick softness.  A blot...

Fragment 10

6 Oct 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

But now it danced and spun like a bloody smear against the darkness. With all but it's uncanny eyes guarded behind a wimple and veil as deeply red as the rest of it. Eyes, wide and glistering like pools of cracked glass in the tepid light of a single...

Fragment 9

4 Oct 2020 1 minute read 0 comments Jay Lonnquist

Once it came wearing red. Incarnadine like freshly spilled heart-blood, still warm from the wound. Most often it moved here and there in flowing cloth of silken coal. In black cord, bitumen colored ribbons and knots.