I spent some time this morning looking over the drawings I did for Inktober this year, and in a few cases I saw things I could fix without starting over, things that I thought might make a real difference, so I went back in with the eraser and pencils to make some adjustments.

In this revision, I moved his armpit into its correct position, and added some details on the torso to make his torso look more like a chest and abs and less like a tan porpoise menacing a disembodied head. Just adding a half a nipple and a contour line where his pectoral muscle belongs made a bunch of difference.