Doctor Platypus

Revisions after Inktober: Floating man

Before and after drawings in pencil and colored pencil - man floating in water

In this revision, I softened the shading on the left foot and lower leg. Very simple, very small, but I think it's made a substantial difference. Probably just to my eye, I imagine, but anyhow. When I looked at the earlier version, my eye was always drawn to the left foot, and I thought it looked like I had scribbled it out. I feel like it looks more footly now, and it's much less distracting to me. 

Before and after drawing in pencil and colored pencil - man floating in water

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DoctorPlatypus
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Current projects: writing a literary history book about Victorian and Edwardian fiction as successor to the medieval dream vision genre. Learning to draw. Slooooowly learning the fancier ins and outs of the roll20 VTT.


Doctor Platypus
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