It was a late lazy summer afternoon. The heat still shimmered in waving curtains, as though being blown by rhyrhmic controlling wind. Jimmy had gone into his living quarters, sealed the entire system, and cranked up the environmental control to compensate for all the heat. As Jimmy began to cool off, he became intensely aware of the solitude , as the gentle whisper of wind circulated within the very quiet atmosphere, of his personal quarters. It as a tremendous difference, compared to, the Constant Attention Grabbing Song being generated by the Fauna and Flora outside.
As his thoughts began to organize, after facing the extreme humidity and heat, He felt a dread forming. He began to realize that he had braved the Hostile Environment, of this strange atmosphere, for a very strong reason!
As a sort of fun activity, i am considering whether to create a serial posting - based on this opening paragraph. I would like to add onto the story, using this original post, as I altered the Title each time.
This may pretty well depend upon the feedback i receive. If you like the idea, are interested in where the story is going, or have any comment - please leave it in the area below. Your input will be very much appreciated.
If things prove favorable, I would like to make this a group project. I could take hints, suggestions, and other input, to build the plot, character, and/or the entire idea. If you like and/or dislike this idea, please feel free to leave your input. -
Which do you prefer i first paragraph building up detail - or the combination of both, hopefully leading up to some good suspenseful cliff hangers!
If nothing else, I may flesh out this beginning, in a few more posts.
This is purely Fiction, Science Fiction, Fantasy. Make of it what You will.
Your comment will be Greatly Appreciated!
Thank You for Your Time, Attention, and Interest!
Anthony